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marcuslee
24-11-2009, 22:27
The description of this forum on the main page could use some attention when you get a chance to fix it.

Here's the way it is now:



thinAir is official thinBasic Editor/IDE. But if not satisfied, here some alternatives.


This way might be better:



thinAir is the official thinBasic Editor/IDE. But if you aren't satisfied, here are some alternatives.


Or, in my opinion, here's one even better than that:



If you aren't satisfied with thinAir, thinBasic's official Editor/IDE, try these alternatives.



Happy Coding!

Mark

ErosOlmi
28-11-2009, 12:09
Fixed